Really clever approach, taking it from Amanda’s perspective – the character background you gave her was witty, and the closing phone conversation was perfect…
I might take a stab at sequelling tomorrow, because you’ve done it so well – bravo! MH :)
At first i didnt understand what her kob was, i was wondering why it always dealt with wives in the middle of the night? well that getting out of the way, it was a good story. Strange enough for me to get in and short enough to want more.
I had to read the prequel before reading this and I’m glad I did. This is a perfect sequel to the original story and I love your characterization of Amanda. So the agency thinks she’s the problem? By the time she finally lands a permanent job she may be just as colorful as her former employers. This was a hoot. Well done!
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