haha, hmm would coma patients touch the veil of fabric between the human and spirit worlds? we think so…
nice addition! love how you tie it all together!

This definitely needs the light at the end of the tunnel.

:-) Battlestar Galactica

Hehe, I love their little petty arguments. For some reason, I’m imagining two physicists in big, white lab coats..

I like it, but some more speaker tags and line breaks in between paragraphs would greatly help.

An excellent ode and continuation to the original. Well done!

I’m working my way through this ficlet-chain and I’m stopping here because I like this one best so far – theres a hilarious chemistry going on between these two.