Wow, vengeance is his??? This makes me a little sad, for some reason. The hero seems so unhappy. I’m not sure if you ran out of characters, but I’d love to know a little more about your hero. What brought him to this? Is he different somehow? Disfigured or deformed? Is he different in other ways, or maybe delusional about it all. Whatever the reason, he certainly seems to have a chip on his shoulder and you’ve made me wonder why. I want to know all! Very well done!
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