This is a good start. I like the action that was building near the end of the story. I think this could have a good sequel.

Oh, what a place to leave me hanging. Lots of suspense in this and I want to know what happens next. (Actually I know one possible outcome, having read the sequel first…I’m always doing that, LOL, but it didn’t ruing this for me.). This was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

Oh, what a place to leave me hanging. Lots of suspense in this and I want to know what happens next. (Actually I know one possible outcome, having read the sequel first…I’m always doing that, LOL, but it didn’t ruing this for me.). This was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.