Ooh… it’s like Lake Wobegon with a eerie veil. I like muchly.
curls up, bites lip apprehensively, waiting for next bit

ooo, i smell a scary story!

Nice setup with interesting characters and a nice small towny (duh) mood.

Good start, good start.

alright i wish this had a been a stand alone story on its own otherwise they wouldn’t be sequels and prequels they would be net page and previous page. I prefer when the stories are whole chapters in one ficlet, but that is just my preference. that is what i would like to see ficly used for because it teaches us to grow inside the 1024 character terrarium. but i have said this before and it is only my opinion so please don’t let it get you down i love the mood i love the set up and the scene was so vivid i was thinking of going to the salon to get a haircut . this a good setup.