I’m not sure if it was meant to do so, but this actually made me smile. I’ve only been a member a couple of days and I’m addicted! Me the queen of verbosity! (Ok, maybe not a queen, but certainly a princess, LOL.) And I feel honor bound to keep up with comments too. Nice piece that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for the smile. :o) Well done and have fun!

I’m a new member as well.

This is just me, trying to keep my comments higher than my published stories, yet without tossing cookie cutter blurbs (just so I can feel I’m keeping the ratio balance on the side of comments).

That would make me nauseous.

I could easily bury my comments under heaps of infamy and just post stories. But Ficly is to amazing for that, so I’m trying my best, as I said, to “become a better something or other.”

I like dash subtlety with a hint of humor.

i commend your efforts!
Bravo!
This is truly worth of a title in the LoA!

Hah. I don’t consider myself a poetry fan, but I’ll be damned if alliteration doesn’t catch my eye. Enjoyed rhyme-to-alliteration-to-rhyme switch.

Clever use of alliteration. I’ve never been good at using it myself, and I really like the rhythm you created with the poem.

That was funny, and came across as sort of a wide-eyed innocent’s vow to do good. It’s a great goal, and I hope you enjoy your time here on Ficly with us.

Laudable goals, and nicely written. I especially liked the final four lines, and the Ficly/quickly rhyme in particular. Alliteration is catchy!

Thanks everyone for your positivity and support! I’ll be doing my best – all this encouragement is really cool.

I’m so glad Ficly found me and gave me a home…