Oh, you can tell he doesn’t want to do it, the desperation, the hurt.
One tiny thing. Penultimate paragraph, third sentence should be lets and not let’s. It’s tiny but distracting.
Otherwise, awesome. Perfect sadist.

Thank you for the affirming words. :)

I fixed the grammar error, also. Thank you for bringing that to my attention.

I’m glad my anal grammar habits are put to use on this site!

the moment is broke, and he returns to the evil tortured soul.