Perfect! The tone and language is dead on and the ending is priceless. Any story with Alice and Dorothy will remind me of Alan Moore’s take on them (for better or for worse) but I think that you nailed it. Kudos to you!

Oh, this is too funny. It made me laugh. What a great way to start my morning. It sort of reminds me of Paul Harvey’s “The Rest of the Story”. You were spot on with Alice’s voice and I loved Dorothy’s gift. So much more than what appears on the surface. Well done!

This is wonderful: two wonderful starting points put together with wonderful characterization and wonderful style, a really good helping of snarky infused in there and a wonderful last line. I realise the repetition is getting a bit much but I think it really is that wonderful, though I may be biased from my love of Oz and Wonderland.

Lovely ambiance, great twist, I am pleased.

Magnificient ending!

This was nominated for the ficly book.