This is an interesting snapshot. It made me think of a near death experience. Is that what was intended. It has a very otherworldly feel to it. Nice job! Thanks for sharing. BTW, love the title…does it refer to the hero or to the door, or what’s behind the door?

The second paragraph had me moving involuntarily to a scene from Swan Lake.
Very vivid,expressive work scrawlers secret.

Love: title and it’s a great start!
In true self-style I have to say that the first line could have been broken up better, for instance:
There was no floor beneath my feet. A feeling of nothingness enveloped me; no hot, no cold – not even the air that surrounded me. (Just a suggestion)
Can’t wait for the rest!

Deane, I see what you are sayign an di may use soemof that advice. thanks for the comment =) and Thanks to the peopel who left the other comments as well

I’m left with a sense of unbalance, the result of your description of what could only be described as some kind of void. Imagining a directionless place such as you described has my head spinning. Very intriguing.

i’m thinking of birth, a soul waiting to be born..