This is so sad. I’m thinking LaTisha has cancer or some other kind of terminal illness? His love for her really stands out in this. Nice characterization too. It tugs at the heart. Well done!

Really nailed the challenge. Trying to come up with something to critique and can’t. I think you really took advantage of the format to let the reader connect the dots.

beautifully sad story of a someone close to death, and a husband willing to sacrifice future financial security for love.
My only comment would be that the questions came across as his internal thoughts, and less from the narrator. IMHO, they might need to be italicized for clarity. Anywho, 5 pencil good regardless.