You say it’s “another obscenely short poem,” I say it’s another insanely awesome poem.

so you play the lottery and push boundaries? lol much love, Ana. I love this little poem. It is the hope of something better that drives most of us.

Sigh, I don’t know why I do this, but I’ve gone and done a sequel again. It seems awful to me (my poem, not yours), but there it is. You got me thinking, and that was the result.

“It’s the might-have-been’s
And could-I-do’s”
I like those lines – not forced at all; that takes skill.

Nice, descriptive but concise.

i love this poem i buy lottery tickets and while i am waiting i dream about what i would do if i won but i have never checked one because that would kill the dream my car is filled with them.