Its so sad. And whats even worse is such a story is common. I hope you dont mind if i sequel.

Not a problem. Go right ahead!

she didn’t feel swell, but is she swelled with child still?
that’s a nice waitress
and the rain pattern line is great. :)

I sequeled your sequel..

♪Elenore, gee, I think your swell,
And you really do me well,
You’re my pride and joy et cetera
Elenore, can I take the time
To ask you to speak your mind,
Tell me that you love me better. ♪

Couldn’t resist. I love the story. Although ‘twat’ is more a word to describe a boy if someone is being hateful, maybe slut or moron or something like that would fit better.

i agree that twat is more insulting to a male but if prick or dickhole still applies to a guy then shouldn’t twat to a girl? oh i dont know i thought about it too much. good story though.

I wish I could comfort Elenore after reading this story. On to the prequels to see what happens.

Hmm, I didn’t know about the meaning of twat, I just thought it was for female not male. Different cultures i guess haha. Thank you all for the comments, I really appreciate it.

How very sad, and all the more so because it does happen. Wow, poor Elenore.

Oops, forgot to rate it. :o)