This is awesome, so bittersweet and I know its true. Here is a hug HUG because You need one.

You should bring her for a visit. :)

i been havin a little trouble writin lately and i didn’t know why till i read my man “a pimp named fishback’s” tag line.
Then i realized why; so i had to sequel and hold up my favorite poet and let him know there is always someone to write for.

Beautiful and sad. I wasn’t quite sure if the “nymphete” was really there or not, but I still really liked it. Well done!

What a comeback, Joe. Now I can follow you in good faith. Story-wise, it was wonderful.

:D

Thanks H.s
and shadow yeah she was there and the speaker sneaks out of bed at night to talk to the urn.

That was really well written. Good stuff :)

Very sad but told in such a way as to not be too maudlin, verging more on something magical and special, albeit tinged with the tragic.

That was an odd comment, now that I look at it. But I liked the poem, so I’ll leave the comment as it is.

awe, awesome sequel. very deep, you basically have rendered me speachless hahah.

Blue i dont think a plastic surgeon with a sewing machine could render you speachless. hehehehehe
I’m just needlin ya, you know i love you blue, and thank.

wow I love that. Second line is absolute brilliance.
This well deserved it’s feature.
Abby
x

Super comeback. Welcome back. Whatever it is, you’ve still got it.

This has been nominated for the ficly poetry book.

Very nice. Deep imagery. I liked the first piece as well.

For some reason, this reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe’s “Annabelle Lee.”