Will the wolf appear again? Another good sequel. Just a few minor fixes: “Even_though” beginning the second paragraph, “Staying” in paragraph 3 should be capitalized, and you might want a comma after “path,” in the last sentence.

Good call on “Staying” I completely missed that and the other two yeah I originally had those but I was two characters over the limit and I couldn’t think of places to remove them. I will fix the Staying errors and thanks for looking out for me for the other two errors.