I always have so much trouble writing in the present tense. The real trouble i have is, making not sound forced or like a play script. With that being said, you did a very good job with this and didnt sound forced at all. It was good and easy to forget that i was reading .

this is a fabulous piece of ‘stream of consciousness’ writing. I’m have to go back and read the series now..

*I have to

so he falls to his death? such an anticlimactic and unsatisfying end to this villain. Does cassie rescue him? does she leave him there to rot beside his wicked contraption and her necklace and key behind? what else does she know about his deeds? AAaargh!

when I wrote this segment, it was not my intention that he dies. Hurt, yes. Damaged physically and emotionally, yes. But not dead.

Coming back to read it a couple of months later, I now read it is very final too. I’m disappointed by that.

Wow. It’s been awhile. I actually cried rereading this series, because it was so amazing to work on, and because I’ve missed you all so much. SandwichMaker, if you don’t think it’s too final… maybe an epilouge? Oh oh. I’ve missed Ficly. And all y’all :)

I have no problem with this story continuing. Like I said above, it wasn’t my intention to wrap it up… I honestly felt like Adam getting hurt was just a bump in the story… I’d love to go back to writing with you again! I’ve missed it.