Okay, one certainly doesn’t expect to read something involving ninja caterpillars before (in my case) 5:30 in the morning… Or indeed at any time of the day for that matter. Very, very different, buy frankly I think it’s working nicely

james and the giant peach, meet your rival! lol, ninja caterpillar, that is a sight! oh and grammar, I think you meant was instead of saw in the last paragraph..
Bug’s Life to a new level.. this has potential.

Pixar have just registered the domains “NinjaCaterpillar.com” and “NinjaCaterpillarTheMovie.com”

Seriously good intro.

Thanks all!
@G-squared- Normally this would be a little strange even for me but I was asked to do it using only the combination caterpillar-ninja.
@ElshaHawk-Fixed!
@Raymond- Remember you saw it here first! Who am I kidding, if Pixar made a Caterpillar-Ninja movie it would be not only an honor but a really, really good movie too.

Oh man… I am so ready for more non-human ninjas.

My only critique here would be that there are a couple words that reappear pretty closely together in the first couple paragraphs – “shape” and conjugations of “to see” – which felt funny as I read this. Other than those though, I want to see me some tiny violence. Really liked the pacing… it’s not that it accelerates, but more that you feel the speed more and more as the story proceeds. Like moving from the back of the stadium up to trackside at a NASCAR race.

Sweet :D I love the imagery of this one. I literally see a caterpillar-ninja in my minds eye, and it made my laugh.

This is brilliantly ingenious dude :D