Very, very nice. Love the poetry of this one, but I’m not sure whether or not it is poetry, because I can’t always see the rhyme. Maybe I just don’t know what poetry really is.

Anyway, I digress. This is a very lovely story, and regardless of the format, I think you have encompassed the challenge superbly :D

I don’t see poetry as rhyming, probably because I find it really hard to do so. You can see mine and Concerned Reader’s rhyme dialogue for evidence of that.

I think that is incredible. I love your poetry style. Definately deserves a five/five.
Well done,
Abby
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