I don’t think it was ever quite that severe. Geisha who found love simply quit their profession, maybe with a couple of lashings, but it was all done by the women of the okiya.

Thats even worse when you cant love your sister. And to show her that shakes head

I know this is a little harsh, but it isn’t her real sister. That is just what they call each other. And she wasn’t beaten to death.

Wow, harsh. But I think this is very well written and the emotions are very deep. Great job! :D