And maybe more than what she expects. This leaves me wondering just what might be waiting for her at the foot of the stairs. Maybe it is just food. Then again, maybe not. Nice job!

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love the backpack comment, i thought the place was empty until that one though, this reads like a nightmare dream where you go down anyway, but you know there is something bad about to happen.

I felt like I was there. You do an awesome job describing things within the character limits imposed by FICLY.