Inspired by the song ‘Leeds United’ by Amanda Palmer, which features the line “Who needs love when there’s Southern Comfort?”

wow – poignant and (sadly) very often true. Well written.

It is often true. Thank you.

Bitter and angry, all very effectively gotten across. You matched the tone of the jilted lover at the bar swigging spirits to a tee, with a slight hint of pity for the next guy. I especially liked that, the sympathy for the next guy rather than misdirected anger at him when it’s obviously the woman who is to blame.

Thanks! I’m glad you liked it!

I love that song, especially that line. s points.
Awesome :)

Thanks :)

I agree with THX, the pity for the next guy was the best part.

Thanks, Elsha!

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