I think I caught a movie reference here, but I’m not sure. I know what it reminds me of, anyway, LOL. This holds together well and has a lot of tension. The last line adds a bit of dark humor. Well done!

This morning it was “our” turn. Minor spelling correction.

And there’s at least 4 movies in there. (Pulp Fiction, Predator, Aliens, Apocalypse Now.) If there’s any others, I don’t see them yet.

I see potential. But its very rushed. I’d like to have seen this built into three or four more involved pieces, building the tension over a longer period of time.

I don’t know about Ben and Raymond, but I loved it. A nice story of some dark force. I think I got a reference, but I’m not sure where from.

The movie I was thinking of was “I Am Legend”. Haven’t seen the others mentioned above. :o)