I love when my stuff inspires sequels from you! I especially like the second stanza.

A bit of a pessimistic look at chance, to oppose Ana’s. The yang to her ying. Or whichever one is which. I like the last line best. and I’m still trying to think of a time opportunity has knocked me on my butt..

Well isn’t somebody just the ideal optimist.
Like Elsha said, I’m liking the contrast with Ana’s poem

“All good sense that I lack”
I like that line!
As everyone above me said – I love the contrast with Ana’s poem. Good stuff!