awwww so cute. you wrote something mushy! =D

Yes, mushy…but also profound. I like the adversarial nature of the romance here. Like the two lovers are reluctant. Nice piece.

This is just proof that mushy can be amazing!

i agree with H.S. here also this just shows people how no matter what walls can be broken and hearts can be fixed

What’s with this ‘mushy’? I think you have strange views on mushy. I think this is beautiful, with so much feeling.

Thank you so much for your comments! That was a joke between blu and I, about her always writing mushy, heartfelt, bittersweet, romantical-type things, lol. I don’t think it was mushy, I think it was ‘sentimental’. :)

awwww, the end made me smile. =^) Life should have more moments like that.

it can be both mushy and sentimental elsh =)

This was Mushy, Mushy, Mushy yeah with a capitol M.

Aw, this was very good! A bit mushy, (well, more than a bit), but very well written. :) I liked it!

OKAY It was MUSHY! LOL. You guys, I love you!

love you too elsha =)

beautiful story, really nice and romantic. the way that her determination is broken down just by seeing him, by feeling what she once felt. its very good, nice, enjoyable.
i dont know if id call it mushy. sentimental would be my word also, but thats opinion i guess ;)