The third section cuts down on the impact for me – It doesn’t portray him as a “misfit”, but more of a guy the ladies are after – which makes the acceptance by Liz less surprising or interesting.
I have to rate this one in a split.
The 1st and 4th section get a 4/5. The 2nd and 3rd section get a 2/5.
RoseTone ~LoA~