Captures perfectly the tone of Bible Belt hymns: the clearly defined methodology to salvation.

Can I just say that the combination of a music story and the devil reminded me of “The Devil Went Down to Georgia,” which we’re playing in orchestra now and is super fun =]

What song prompted this? Is the title the song? I found this a little bit disturbing. The dialogue threw me until I caught onto the accent, which made the story have more impact.

I put it in the tags: Sinnerman by Nina Simone. I love that song.

I actually read a book that was inspired by the song “Sinnerman”

Really? What’s it called?

I can’t remember the title, but the antagonist is a guy who accidentally killed his brother. He felt damned and decided to be a hired killer. It was one by Stephen Hunter. He wrote the book they based the movie “Shooter” on.

Loved it! Very well written.

Wow, very nice. I love that song, got the reference immediatly. Nice take on the song, works very well.
I particularly like the way you paced it through your paragraphs.