stands and applauds bravo elsh. bravo! amazing wisdom here =)

i wrote a sequel, not as good as urs but i thought i would put my idea down as well =)

Children don’t have that luxury but sometimes the automatic acceptance is awesome to behold. Two kids can become “best friends” for reasons that no longer exist for adults. I envy them and occasionally nostalgia gets the better of me.

As for your story, it seems less like a story and more of some well thought out opinions/statements. I think it is interesting and clearly there are some exceptional ideas presented, but I have no character to root for (other than myself) and no trials to attach these revelations to. Still, it is well written and engaging. I am interested in any further thoughts you have.

Don’t you just love these deep philosophical ‘thoughts-to-paper’ type stories. Bravo, Elsha, Bravo. I loved this story, as one who has royally ruined his own life and would love to edit it.

I know its not a story, more of an essay, but my word of the day was Edit and this is what came out. :) Feel free to sequel with your own stories and experiences where you wish you could go back and Edit.

standing ovation this is awesome. great job with this one. i also like how it came to be because your word of the day was edit

i dont know if i really like this or if i am just glad you aren’t mad and ranting (and getting featured) about me for once.hehehehe
Ok i know now….I like it.
and i like the comment about how two kids can meet and become partners in crime, just because they both hate green beans.

I MADE SURE IT DIDN’T GET FEATURED!

well its featured now lolll

no not this one..the other one..

im lost.. it says this one is featured lol

congrats on the feature
four the sixth time this week
awesome possum!!!!

this is brilliant! Congratz on the feature

Lovely little thought piece. I used to waste hours as an adolescent going back over and over a day, vain attempts to edit what had happened, make revisions. At best it was planning for the next occurrence, but mostly it was just editing.