come on man, i dont think that this type of writing is wrong or bad, i just think that ficly is not the place for it.
i mean i use the internet for more questionable content than this story, but globs of semen dripping onto his crotch is usually preceded by a screen that asks are you over eighteen.
I am not lobbying for cencorship just change of venue.

There are probably a dozen reasons why I like this, though few of them are because of the raw vulgarity. Mostly I find it absolutely interesting that we (you and I) could write stories that mirror each other back to back. It’s amazing really.
I don’t know what the standards are for ficly, but I think the scene is well written. I can certainly imagine everything clearly and the words you’ve chosen have weight and passion.

Mighty Joe has a point, when you consider how loose Ficly’s Mature rating is, and how many tweens frequent this site.

Sorry I missed this one. Personally, this is what I think the mature tag is for, but that’s just me.

I expressed my opinion. I didn’t want censor it. for that, I’m sorry to see you take the story down. Maybe you’ll post an extended version on your blog?

I appreciate the comment from THX on this one. I wasn’t sure what the community standards were on this particular thing. I wasn’t even aware of the existence of the “Mature” tag until I dropped a flurry of F-bombs in a story. I’ve removed the story to avoid stirring up controversy or playing the troll. I appreciate the support and critiques of the writing. In the future, I can’t see myself removing something unless one of the site gurus specifically tells me to.