Still in that state of uncontrol. The voice of the character whose body has been taken sounds resigned in this story, like he’s accepted the fact that there’s nothing he can do.

i love the image that you created with the speaker removed from the action on the surface, separated by some tranquil barrier.

I’ve read the 3 stories in this series several times since you published the 1st one. I wasn’t sure how to comment. heck, I’ve batted around a sequel for the first story in this series for a couple of weeks now, maybe one day my muses will focus and I’ll actually put my thoughts and feelings into a sequel, but I’m getting off point…

This is a deeply insightful story that has a wonderful southern feel to it. The two brother character’s have depth, and you capture the nuances of a small town…all of which is hard to pull off in such a small space like ficly.