was it her word or was it someone elses? will she be rescued? nicely done.

Firstly, cleanly written, well done. Secondly, if you’ve ever been near someone like this, it’s terrifying… the way they feel is echoed very strongly here.

You’ve written it well, and for anyone who’s ever been depressed it will resonate. I love the twist at the end-the hope we get.
This took me places. It is greatness.