There isn’t quite enough detail for me to be able to figure out for sure what is happening here. That isn’t necessarily a bad thing if someone wants to write -quels to this: they could take the story almost anywhere. The story is made much tougher to read than it needs to be by the plethora of punctuation errors. If that’s unintentional, left me know and I’ll send you a note about it.

I have never been much at grammer and puncution. It probably didn’t help that i did this at like 11 at night. I will read through this some more and try to fix some of the errors. And its supposed to be real vague.