I like this a lot. … … except for line 5. The poem is nothing about feelings, so I guess I don’t know what line 5 is trying to say.

I dunno, I think it is about feeling but in a more subtle way.

I made an error in my previous comment. What I meant to say was that the poem is all about feelings, rather than nothing. That said, the first half of line 5 suggests an absence of feeling to me.

What about that?

how about, there is no describing the intense emotion?

I like it. Was it ever love? good question. Can we forget love?

y’know, you don’t necessarily have to be sorry for how you feel.

wow. That was beautifully written. Made me feel for them. I did like the question was it ever love?

i believe it was love, or else u wouldnt feel this way