It would have been correct if you would have written out the word phonetically using the english alphabet. But the way you wrote is the way T.S Elliot or Ezra pound would have and did incorporate languages into their letters. anyway nice story and welcome to ficly. get a PIXHONEYMOONSOVERHEHEHEHE
I only understand two thirds of it but I think I get the drift but only because the first and the last sentence are the same. Where is this secret Russian Faire? @ Mighty Joe-Alan Moore is notorious for that as well.