Hey
sorry i havent been around much latly. Heres a new one, hope you guys like!
Looking foward to your feedback

Ouch, this was quite the little story. Fittingly disorienting, it had that dreamy, semi-detached feel that one might expect to associate with slipping slowly from life. I was a bit confused at times, but overall it worked for the slow reveal at the end.

Thanks very much, that was the effect I was going for :)