Well written. The description of the room sets the scene really well. Nitpicks: a) It seems to me that you use a few too many commas. You usually don’t need one before a conjuction (and, but). b) A bed with 4 posts is correctly called a “four post_er_ bed”. c) The end of the 1st sentence in the 3rd paragraph seems a little awkward. Instead of “dresser that were a dark oak,” could I suggest “dresser, all made from dark oak.”? d) The word “semi” is a prefix and shouldn’t be used on its own as an adverb. I would suggest “partially” instead.
August Rode