fear doesnt have to be weakness. Great story. i caughta coupel typos while reading it. “I’m loseing may paitence Liza, jump now, or be owned by fear.” I belive may is supposed to be my? and “but I promised myslef” myself. just thought id point those out.
There’s a 1st person/3rd person switch in here. I can’t tell if there’s 3 characters or 2.
I really like the lines, " That wasn’t the first time that I had gotten myself thrown off a wall, but I promised myself, it would be my last. For this month anyway." Hehe.