Hehe great work! I like where you’re taking it by going into her training, and leaving the question of what happened to the rest of the crew open. Rock on!

Wonderful. It definitely has drawn me in and I am eager for more to be revealed!

Hey great job in adapting the tone and still making it your own. I am curious!

This is a great story. But I’m not sure where it can be taken from here. Probably nobody else could think of anything either, which is why it has gone unsequelled for so long.

Pity.

nice sequel! the training the conservation of oxygen.. just awesome details, though it didn’t progress the story..