Oooh, I loved this! Great response, showing the other side of the supposedly delicious-looking cheeseburger. I like how it’s blunt enough to get the point across, without being preachy.

Incredible…normally i feel inconvenienced when someone sequels my stories because i hardly ever put too much thought into my ideas, so when they write from my stuff…its just a bit, dunno

BUT I REALLY LIKE THIS!!!
I love the mom, mostly because I disagree with her parenting methods, she is just brutal and crazy. Makes me think that she’d poison a burger before letting her son eat it :)

Well, this suffers from several points of confusion, from the nitpicky (a bob is, by definition, shorter than shoulder-length) to the more central (why is his mom just hanging out in a shadowy(!) corner of the cafeteria?), so it’s not terribly immersive for me.

But it’s a fun idea nonetheless. I actually work just down the street from a cattle processing plant with a giant PETA billboard nearby. Heh.