whoa, this got theological fast. and technically, god would be a tiny bit older than death, like twins but one came out seconds before…

Well, that was bizarre. The writing is smooth and works well, especially since you kept it restrained and let the strangeness of the concept/situation carry it instead of trying to ‘over-write’ it…like I usually try to do.

Is that a typo, or did you mean for God to go a little ghetto with, “You damn right.”? Didn’t fit for me, but if that’s what you meant, eh, could be a style choice and all.

I have no idea why God, as Elsha says, would be older. I think Death would be older, not that I’m actually a big fan of personifying a facet of existence.