Something very odd seems to have happened with this story, Robert. It’s over 1600 characters in length. Has there been some kind of hiccup involving the last 4 paragraphs? The repetition, with each paragraph adding one more sentence, doesn’t look entirely intentional.

Wow! yea its got about 600 extra characters. How does that happen? It’s not intentional because I read the story in email format, and it doesn’t repeat that. Huh…ficly fluke?

That was very strange. I edited and reposted several times and it always turned into that other story. The funny part is when I went in to edit the story it looked normal. I guess the repetition broke it. The story you two saw, was not the story I posted. I apologize for the error but I don’t know how it happened.

its all good :)
And you hit par on ur story, if you were wondering =D