This really is applesauce and nonsense but I get a dark atmosphere.

I know it’s nonsense, it just…needed to come out.

salvadore Dahli would have said this is your masterpiece. i feel often times i have a crazy surrealist sneaze that has to come out before i can be balanced enough to be silly. i hope my next surrealist moment is as poignant as this ficly.

yes she is too pretty! maybe she needs some confidence and good shampoo. That hotel stuff is cheap.

Haha, and I didn’t even know I was being surrealist! I just thought I was spouting random crap.

Very stream-of-consciousness. My favorite stanza is 1 through 7.

There only are seven…

I know. I’m saying I loved all of them.

Oh right. I get it now…I’m just a little slow today I guess =]
Thank you!

This was nominated for the ficly poetry book.

I love this.

The piece is a fantastic study in presenting the reader with minute details about a minute detail. It’s a beautiful example of how someone might try to explain a photograph to someone over the phone. Or through a story titled Applesauce and Nonsense.

Well Done!