Ouch. Suicide is so awful.

I’m guessing it changed POV, if so, nice.

Oh, I didn’t think it had, I thought it was the friend screaming and crying.
If it’s true – I’ve been there, and I know how awful it is.
One note – you spelled the title wrong…=]

I liked it. I did think it was screaming and crying upon discovery of her dead friend.

lol i missed an i. its been a long day… thanks someday

i like this alot i have been there in that deep dark whole of depression and almost suicide. i fight with that feeling everyday of my life and this poem shows it perfectly even in those so few words