Ooh, very intriguing indeed. I love the relationship between these two guys and that they are keeping promises they made a long time ago.

Disposing of bodies for friends is a great concept for a story. Nicely done.

i like the relationship between them as well but! i think a little more description would be nice “When I got there the bodies were already cool.” doesn’t really paint the scene very well

Great story! Along with what Mentis said, the first sentence doesn’t fit the flow. How does he know the dead bodies have cooled off before he even enters the house?

I think you can leave it there and change the tense of the second sentence to a desription of how Roy let you into the house, or you can move the “bodies were already cool” description to the end of the paragraph.

Anyway, if i ever have a “problem” i know who i am going to call…

Ooooo! I like this! I always thought it interesting when friendships either developed or were rekindled by horrible events. It adds such a dramatic note to the idea. I like your wording too. It seems natural and I like how you make us almost guess what exactly is going on. But we get it. Great little almost noir feel to it too!

I’m a sucker for secrets. Love the bond.