Concise, crystal clear, beautiful.
Oh. Is it truly for love, or self gain?
Aww. Controversial it might be but if it gets to it I want to go this way. You caught it in the twelve most perfect words. Nothing fancy just pure beauty.
A short concise story about giving his wife a Maximum Strength Midol PMS. True a gift of love. :-P
Very concise, yet very potent.