I took the inspiration and most of the lines from a post I saw on ‘Not Always Right’ which usually shows cases of customers acting stupidly. It made me feel better just reading this one:
(I am shelving DVDs in a library when a man comes in with a boy who appears to be autistic. The boy sees a movie about Thanksgiving)
Boy: “Thanksgiving! I love Thanksgiving! I’m thankful… I’m thankful for… I’m thankful for my friends at school!”
Caretaker: “You’re thankful for your friends at school?”
Boy: “Yeah! Yeah and… and… what are you thankful for? Are you thankful for your friends?”
Caretaker: no response
Boy: “Are you thankful for me?”
Caretaker: “I’m thankful for you, kid. I’m more thankful for you than all my friends in the world.”
Boy: smiles
….. So really it isn’t mine at all. I just wanted to share it. I hope there really is more kindness like this in the world.
It’s interesting how different people take away from a story different things, isn’t it? Where you focused nearly exclusively on the boy, I find that the caretaker is equally deserving of consideration here as well. In the original story, there is only one act of kindness. In your version, there are two and I think you disregarded the second one, the hug given to a potentially friendless man, entirely.
Your take on the original story leaves most of the source material intact, and adds a small amount of original material of your own. I realize that you ran very close to the character limit, but I would really have preferred to see you make this story your own.
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