hahaha, very scientific, discovery channel style of fun.

I was not aware of the fact that Bluefish was conceived during an orgy.

I agree with Elshahawk that this is told in an concise, matter-of-fact way.

If I’d actually thought of doing it like a Discovery Channel program, I would have inserted commercials. I wish I had thought of it. ElshaHawk, next time suggest something before I need it, not after. ;-)

lol! but with 1024 characters, you can’t even spare the transitions TO the commercials.

@ElshaHawk: I did think about that, but I concluded that putting the commercials in would chop the story into ADD-suitable fragments every bit as much as happens on TV. To be honest, I would have simply inserted text that read like deodorant ad. Short and generic. I may try an alternate version of this story to see what happens with that approach.

i think you segmented it well with the stages of the fish’s life. :)

Damn it! Who blabbed? I thought I paid to have all this about my past “go away.”

This really made my day. :D