Uncannily close to the truth. Nitpick: another erred line should be another erroneous line, or something like that. I bet you put that there just for me, didn’t you? ;-) Oh, yeah, nearly forgot… you are in such trouble, PJ. I’ve already started your biography. ;-)

Man, i was trying to write my first unnitpickable story. I will have to do a bit of amending as I was 1 character short of the limit. Ah, well. My life goal is as yet unachieved.
PS I’m excited about my biography. I feel important!

@the it’s for your own good crowd.No really, just relax, imagine yourself in a safe secure place. Now be truthful, you are safe here. When you can find fault in every other writer in the world’s story, no matter how innocuous the flaw, or how superfluous the cure, how does that make you feel inside? In a land where every man is flawed, the hunter of the flaws isn’t a unique fingerprint, he’s a dime a dozen. It’s a party trick for the socialy inept, who cannot shine on the merits of their sense of humor or sardonic whit. Now August you know i can’t mean you, because you are just trying to help people. I applaud your altruism. Wait did that sound sarcastic, or maybe its facetious, i hate nitpicking.

@Mighty-Joe: I thank you for your opinions: I shall always treasure them for precisely what they are worth. I don’t know whether you’ve noticed or not, but I don’t generally comment on your stories, so you needn’t be concerned with nitpicks from me. I think that we both know that it would be pointless, but I suspect that we arrive at that conclusion for different reasons.

hahaha, that does sound like our August.

wow, August ‘nitpicked’ his honorary bio…that’s the most hardcore critique ever.

August is the only guy I know who would post the errors on his own story in a comment before editing, =D