The last line caught be my surprise. Throughout the story it seemed like a teenager, I never had her pegged as a woman with a child, let alone children. This is a great, well-written piece.
For a moment, I thought she was talking to the tree. It had a bittersweet feeling like Shel Silverstein’s ‘The Giving Tree’. Excellent piece of writing. The only nit-picky thing I can suggest is (if you have the extra room), add spaces for ease of reading. Other than that, nice work. Cheers!
Mr.Gabriel
H.S. Wift
Horrorfan13
someday_93
Robert Quick
Angela LaFey