Then, a brilliant spotlight on a toucan. I think you over looked something in that fragment.
Otherwise this was a very “out there”, little tale, i dig it.

This was an insightful glimps into how little traumas can effect people, but the best part is how you wrapped it into a nicely little story.

btw, MJY is wrong about the “Then, a brilliant spotlight on a toucan” line… although it doesn’t have a verb, it works.