This was epic. I liked how it seemed like you had a million characters to play with, yet only 1024. That was awesome. welcome to ficly.

So many good descriptions.. I like crumpled into a corner, reminds me of wadded up pages, and you bring that back at the end with the new weapon, words. The modern technology must be a computer, rather than the steampunk legends he was tinkering with. Then there is the image of a creator with a similar visage in his creation, a biblical reference, thrown together with riding off into the sunset. This is quite a morsel to swallow!

first off…welcome to Ficly!

At first glance, I assumed this would be just a jumbled or rambling wall of words (ie no line breaks or new paragraphs), which seems to be a trap alot of new ficliteers fall into….but… the wonderful discriptions were a delight to read, and made this enjoyable to read.

Thanks all! I’m really quite happy to be here, and I’m glad you’re all so hospitable!