MILF= Mother I’d Like (to) Fuck

& THE END. (:

& Sorry if this ended so suddenly. I tried to make it so it didn’t just end like BAM.

Aww. I was worried but it’s not too cheesy like the end of Harry Potter 7.
I like the little exchange at the end :)

LOL…Sorry Gabriel, you can’t use a comment to copyright this…anyways, once posted on ficly, it falls under Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 License. :-)

well the ending was quick, but she can’t bartend at 18. The getting out part was okay, well orchestrated, but her dad was blunt. and yeah, it can’t be copyrighted.

Can’t blame me for trying! :D

& @Elsha. She isn’t really able to be a stripper at 17 either, but stuff happens.

Definitely a funny ending that fits with reality. Priorities can change, but habits die hard. The second to last sentence in the first paragraph is a fragment, so it stands out, but it could probably stay since I see what you were going for with it.

Aww. I’m kinda sad that it’s over, but it needed to end sometime. I liked the ending. Great story.

I feel the same way Kendall. I could’ve made it longer, but it would end up repeating the same storyline-ish.

I’m actually really satisfied with the ending.

nice story, i like. the title and first paragraph create masses of implied background info. in fact the whole story does frankly. from what we are given, we can assume so much more about the protagionists life to now.
i enjoyed this alot

Er… It is copyrighted to Mr Gabriel unless he explicitly puts it into the public domain. By posting it on Ficly, he has released it under the terms of the CC licence, which means that he has given all of us permission to use it under those terms, but he is the copyright holder and will remain so.

Anyway, this is one of those Ficly epics and is one of the better ones. It’s kept me entertained for many months. Great work.

She should move to the UK. You can be a bartender at 18 here.

:O Whoever said she wasn’t in the UK in the first place?

She said ‘pants’ instead od ’trousers; at some point. So, Yank.

Maybe she talks like an American?

LOOK. SHE IS IN A MAGICAL WORLD.

Let’s just say, she used her assets to get into the club at a young age, and the same thing for the bartender. We all cleared up? OK.

Deal!

Yes! It’s all nicely wrapped up.
I’m exultant.
That was a great ride, thank you.

I love the end how she says she hasn’t completely changed, well written all around :)

Thanks Raegan! I’m glad another of my consistent readers was satisfied!

I believe Stacie did it to leave the past exactly where it’s supposed to be. Ethan was a major part of that, so I guess she just needed a fresh start.